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Dead End

10 May

I was approached by HastyWords to duet with her…. Here it is πŸ™‚

Dead end

Dead end (Photo credit: bzhmatth)

 

 

 

 

 

 

Dead End

I sat looking at my hands
Wondering what I had done
It was too soon to be horrified
I was sitting comfortably numb

So many thoughts
Running round in my head
Too late to take back
The hasty words that were said

I have said sorry to often
No longer should it be said
I will just sit here a bit longer
Try to erase images in my head

Hit with mixed emotions
Pain, confusion, fear
Yet you’re the only person
I wish were with me here

Reality filters back in
I realize you are gone
The only road I’m left with
Is the one marked “DEAD END”

 

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Posted by on May 10, 2013 in Poetry

 

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24 responses to “Dead End

  1. Kira

    May 10, 2013 at 7:45 pm

    Wow! This is a beautiful collaboration, B! You all did a wonderful job…great imagery. I’ve had one of those “dead end” moments so I could really relate to each line. Thank you!

     
    • Comfortably Numb

      May 10, 2013 at 8:39 pm

      Glad you like it πŸ™‚ Like I said to hasty words – i like how its vague enough to be open to interpretation…yet strong enough for people to relate to it πŸ™‚

       
  2. WyndyDee

    May 10, 2013 at 8:02 pm

    Reblogged this on Wyndy Dee and commented:
    Wow!

     
  3. WyndyDee

    May 10, 2013 at 8:02 pm

    That is powerful! πŸ˜ƒπŸ’–

     
  4. Charles Yallowitz

    May 10, 2013 at 8:19 pm

    Loved the raw emotion in the words. How does a poetic duet work exactly?

     
    • Comfortably Numb

      May 10, 2013 at 8:40 pm

      Well, you take turns writing a section each 9Hastywords wrote the first one in ours) and see where it goes..and then post the results obviously lol xB

       
      • Charles Yallowitz

        May 10, 2013 at 8:58 pm

        Cool. You two did a great job.

         
      • Comfortably Numb

        May 10, 2013 at 9:04 pm

        Thank you πŸ™‚ Its my first one and it seemed to go swimmingly…Would you like to duet with me Charles? You can choose the topic/theme and start it off if you like? Email me if so… beth.army@yahoo.co.uk xB

         
      • Charles Yallowitz

        May 10, 2013 at 9:07 pm

        Sure, but I wouldn’t know where to begin or the topic. I’m more than willing to let you take the lead if you want.

         
      • Comfortably Numb

        May 10, 2013 at 9:10 pm

        lol ok how about you choose the topic…and ill start the poem πŸ˜‰

         
      • Charles Yallowitz

        May 10, 2013 at 9:22 pm

        I might need some time to think of something. My poetry topics tend to be descriptive stuff.

         
      • Comfortably Numb

        May 11, 2013 at 12:55 pm

        Take your time – you’ll know where I am πŸ˜‰

         
      • Charles Yallowitz

        May 11, 2013 at 1:15 pm

        Thanks. Woke up feeling like I have the flu, so it might take a while before I can think of anything.

         
      • Comfortably Numb

        May 11, 2013 at 1:16 pm

        Aw no :/ get dosed up and sleep
        The weekend away – hope you feel better soon xB

         
      • Charles Yallowitz

        May 11, 2013 at 1:21 pm

        Me too. Though, I think it might be the weather jumping from nice to abysmal. It always destroys me.

         
      • Comfortably Numb

        May 11, 2013 at 1:23 pm

        Same here, I also forget I have hayfever so as soon as the sun comes out I always “get a summer cold” and then remember the tablets lol

         
  5. beetleypete

    May 10, 2013 at 9:27 pm

    I’m sure it is not a dead end, but it was a nice project, nonetheless.
    As ever, Pete. X

     
  6. behindthemaskofabuse

    May 10, 2013 at 11:49 pm

    That rocks!

     
  7. Mocha

    May 11, 2013 at 8:53 pm

    ummm…did you murder someone…

     

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